Rotoua Basketball

I am learning to start sentences with different words (and never with ‘and’)

( I could use firstly, After that, later on, When we finished

I think I was successful and I  think I improved  my writing  I have different time words.

ROTORUA BASKETBALL

On monday we went to Rotorua for my sisters tournament. Her team's
name was KeriKeri Our whole family but my brother didn't

Come.But at least everyone else came.We took off we were

Starving. Later on i went to sleep i dreamed about fish and chips.

After that. I woke up we had fish and chips. A few minutes we had some
food  we got WHANGAREI i had a sleep . It was 3 hours  we got in
AUCKLAND.We stopped for a drink,toilet,wait,

My mum said i for got the pillows so we went back to the warehouse

When we got in the warehouse we. Got the cheapest pillows ever. Ti was only 40$.We had 109 dollars from my mum's reports. she only had about ten reports.Finally we carried on going to ROTORUA and we finally got to the to the basketball tournament .Then the score was 34 35 suddenly my sister shot a three pointer that was a the best three that i have ever seen at my sisters basketball game and then we all screamed,yelled.

  AND THAT WAS THE BEST BASKETBALL GAME EVER